This rocks! I love your voice! I'd like to hear some more exotic melodies with your voice, and certainly more of your upper octave.
I instantly recognized the AddictiveDrums! I abuse that drum machine a lot. The drums sound great, I might change the beat during the song some more, maybe a dreamier kit altogether. I hear some nice dynamics and ghosting going on, but the hard hits hit really hard and should probably be brought down to bring out your voice.
Otherwise, all the instruments sound great, and the composition is great c: I enjoyed it!