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Hey, I'm a 17-year-old aspiring guitarist. I've been playing guitar for two years. If you want to know more, just ask me, I'll gladly answer. Contact me at obstructure@hotmail. com
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"Probably the cheesiest thing I've ever seen."
And I loved it. All I can really say is watch the minor clipping on the sound, but otherwise, great quality animation, excellent concept and uh, fantastic choice of music. ;)
Please grace us with more flash.
Author's Response:
Yea, I use ur music for the Menu & Credits, lol.
My Flash usually submitted like once per 3weeks, maybe becuz I do it very detailed or Im rlly slow animator? :p
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But maybe it should be toned down to put a bit more into smoother transitions. When changing scenes, try doing something like a slow fade out, then fade back in, because things happen too fast for anyone to catch up.
Also, try having the voice actors not sound so monotone; the best voice acting is when you start feeling stupid saying the lines :D
Awesome choice of music for the action scene by the way :3
Author's Response:
Oh thanks I'm glad someone left a helpful review! ^^
I had a feeling that the scenes change speed was a problem, I scared myself into thinking the movie was going to be too big when I finished it I know better now.
I was probably the monotone one since I'm a girl trying to voice act most of the guys in the movie, besides that is about how I sound. I'll try harder.
I'll keep all your advice in mind, while working on the next one, thanks. ^^
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Graphics:
Nothing there really.
Style:
Parody of a parody of adult swim. Not ever going to see something like it again, but it's not flashy, or stylish.
Sound:
Eh.. just a decent quality over-used song.
Violence:
Uhh.., probably not intended.
Interactivity:
At least there IS a replay button.
Humor:
I personally got nothing out of it.
All you did was put some white text on a black backdrop, record a videoclip, and called it an [adult swim] flash parody. You didn't even attempt at humor. At least I hope not. I assume you meant the flash series [adult swim], please make that clear so other people won't be confused.
Damn near impossible to parody white text that's already a parody of a television sector anyway. If so, don't attmept, you only get the production of... well.. this.
Author's Response:
That, my friend, is a constructive review. Keep that up.
Graphics: yup. Not much one can do when parodying a black screen/white text.
Sound: "Chariots of Fire" was made for a movie about the Olympic games if I remember. So I felt it fit with the whole swimming thing (olympic swimming). I know it's overused, which is why I used an audio portal submission rather than the original.
Interactivity: yeah I put "1" when I review movies as well. Interactivity really only applies to games.
Humor: To each their own.
And yes, I meant the flash series of [adult swim].
Really, this is more of an inside joke for me, because at my work, we have an "adult swim", which is old people swimming laps. This is what came to mind when I first heard of the [adult swim] series.
Thanks for the good review. If only more users reviewed like you do...
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This awe-inspiring film was quite impressive. I enjoyed the impressive amount of detail, the smooth animation, and the wonderous amount of character you implented in everyone's faces, it gave them each a diverse personality.
The sound was impressive, the music fit the atmosphere as well. Definately something to jam to.
Quite original, it's a beautiful fight scene, and it's atmosphere was unbelievably awesome.
Violent as well, got to see lots of extremely gory things in there.
You could do a lot with this flash, even though it was merely a movie. The mouse could go in the upper right corner of the movie, or even in the center. FANTASTIC.
You had me rolling on the floor. I still get a chuckle everytime I think about this very film.
You've overdone yourselves. Congrats, this is truely a piece of art to be praised forever. 5.
Author's Response:
sire, I would like to express my sincere gratification upon reading your review. I am quite pleased to see a reviewer who can appreciate the hard, grueling, utterly tiresome period of 5 minutes I sacraficed to create this work of art. I thank you kind sir and wish you the best of luck in the future.
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This is like a new drug. Definately a great game.
Pros:
Addicting. Always a nice touch.
Good music, matched the atmosphere. As did the graphics.
The back and forth idea, which required strategy and experimenting.
Ball movement was fluid.
Cons:
You stole two hours of my life. >_<
I want them back.
Good work, simplicity at it's best.
Author's Response:
Thanks alot, You seem to appreciate everything for the exact reason i did it!
-icarus
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Being the huge Starcraft fan I am, this entry is the essence of outright awesome.
Your 3-D models are spectacular, your dialogue is perfected, and the atmosphere and music fits perfectly. Awesome job, the numbers say it all.
Author's Response:
Cheers - as usual if the fans of SC are still happy, I'm happy, being one myself I want to do a good job!
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How do you people shun this man?! He took 26 years to make this, and it looks pretty damn sweet to me.
Graphics - Just beautiful, it all looked very realistic, congrats dude!
Style - Unique! I know not a single person who whould think of this. Nice!
Sound - New favorite song. Just plain outright godly work man.
Violence - That was adventurous, and violent as well. Awesome!
Interactivity - You can click on the PLAY BUTTON? That is jaw-DROPPING.
Humor - I'm still rolling on my floor, perfected man! You should be a comic.
This is a professional piece of work, and shall be praise on Newgrounds forever. Definately satisfactotory.
Author's Response:
Yep. I was dissapointed how it didnt get frontpage.
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