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Age/Gender: 16, Male
Location: Corinth, TX
Job: Educations K-12
Hey, I'm a 16-year-old aspiring guitarist. I've been playing guitar for a little less than a year. If you want to know more, just ask me, I'll gladly answer. Contact me at obstructure@hotmail.
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Flash Reviews: 58
Music Reviews: 42
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Latest Flash Reviews
Good job! Great animation and syncing with the show's audio. Can't give a lot of credit here other than the awesome animation, which is a 10/10, as it is smooth and fresh.
@MadCow's Review: I'm black, and I take no offense to this movie or any other petty word used in it. You're just a pussy.
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"Probably the cheesiest thing I've ever seen."
And I loved it. All I can really say is watch the minor clipping on the sound, but otherwise, great quality animation, excellent concept and uh, fantastic choice of music. ;)
Please grace us with more flash.
Author's Response:
Yea, I use ur music for the Menu & Credits, lol.
My Flash usually submitted like once per 3weeks, maybe becuz I do it very detailed or Im rlly slow animator? :p
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But maybe it should be toned down to put a bit more into smoother transitions. When changing scenes, try doing something like a slow fade out, then fade back in, because things happen too fast for anyone to catch up.
Also, try having the voice actors not sound so monotone; the best voice acting is when you start feeling stupid saying the lines :D
Awesome choice of music for the action scene by the way :3
Author's Response:
Oh thanks I'm glad someone left a helpful review! ^^
I had a feeling that the scenes change speed was a problem, I scared myself into thinking the movie was going to be too big when I finished it I know better now.
I was probably the monotone one since I'm a girl trying to voice act most of the guys in the movie, besides that is about how I sound. I'll try harder.
I'll keep all your advice in mind, while working on the next one, thanks. ^^
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Latest Audio Reviews
First of all, you're out of tune. You are also off tempo throughout the whole thing, and you're skipping notes, and hitting bad notes. You should also acquire a better understanding of theory so you can turn this song around and make it fitting for an acoustic guitar, like hitting barre chords and using open b and e strings on the E chords, something with a little more natural rhythm with your right hand, so it feels better and sounds better, etc. Rather than just playing the original electric guitar version on an acoustic with stiff notes and poor timing.
Keep practicing though!
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I like the diverse percussion and the key change and wow, I'll have to get to work on this one soon!
Good job again dude, another sweet track!
Author's Response:
thanx
glad you like it, hope you'll get your solo soon on it ;)
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Freakin' incredible shredding as usual, ridiculous fretwork! I don't know how you do it.
Author's Response:
Thanks man...the way I do it is uh..... black magic
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